In case you are wondering why this picture is out of season, I’m thinking it might very well go on the cover of Harry’s Book. I took it the first time we hiked above the tree line: you can see he is still quite puppyish there.
I’m blogging about it now as he has just finished the first very (very!) rough draft. One advantage of the dreary weather throughout January is that he has been less tempted to be outside all day and has buckled down to work.
About 25,000 words were put together last winter. Your average 200-page book needs about 80,000 words unless there are illustrations, in which case less is OK. So far he has 65,000, but a lot of sections will need extra sentences to make the finished work less stilted and flow better. (And there will be a lot of illustrations.) For the first draft, Harry started at the beginning and simply kept writing until the end. There was no attempt to sort things out very much as the frame of the book was not very apparent until the manuscript was finished.
Now the manuscript is being reworked. It is now much more obvious where things go. Once this draft is finished, it will be printed off and Harry will go through it very carefully. It will be easier with a hard copy to see which details should go where and to delete any repeats. It is very helpful to go back and forth between a hard copy and a computer screen. Things look differently on the different substrates. Because I started my writing career by sending letters to Peter Gzowski’s Morningside on CBC Radio, I used always to read the material out loud as I wrote it. I find that this practice also helps a book manuscript to flow better, and I have encouraged Harry to do this.
Just thought you’d like to know how he is getting on!
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Good to get an update. I’ve enjoyed all of your books. When I write I read by subvocaliziong the words in my mind. I edit from printed versions as well, but have a nasty habit of editing on the computer as I go. That really slows me down. – Margy
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So glad Harry got working on his book – I know he’ll do an excellent job as always (lol!). Harry is such a handsome fellow. Hope you are getting some sunshine these days, Chris. We had a sunny morning but it’s overcast again – ugh!!!! It’s mild but – – – .
Hi Chris, Writing is a lot of work, I see you got a break to go to the Tatla Party. I saw the Board Feet competition in Whitehorse at the start of the Yukon Quest, years ago.
That is a lovely picture of Harry, he’s a most photogenic dog. My favorite picture of him is as he is coming through the snow towards the camera.
Hopefully your light will be getting much better now as we are into February.
I am very much looking forward to reading about Harry’s adventures with you.
I love the image of Harry reading the manuscript out loud to check it’s flow. Always suspected he was a smart doggie. Fan eagerly waiting; keep up the good work, Harry!
Good to have another of your books on the way!
I assume you meant Harry’s RUFF draft…
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Yay!!!!! Congratulations on finishing the first draft! I think I heard your sigh of relief 😉
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Is that a rough copy … or a “ruff” copy by Harry.
Harry is a treasure, I do hope he has a very successful book.